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Contest Entry for :iconblueshinewolf: I worked really hard on this, so I hope I place, lol The background took so long, each blade of grass individually drawn, etc. I've hidden some constellations in the sky too.

Also, for those of you who don't know what epoch means, here: [link] I'm using the first definition.

The reason why Moon(on the mini-hill) is darker than the others is because she is in the middle of transforming into her Eclipse form. Yes, I know that is a lame excuse for me accidentally coloring her too dark. :XD:

I hate how this scanner takes out the colors. This is a lot more vibrant in real life. :<

Background: Prismacolor pencils and Fabric markers(stars)
Wolves: Faber Castel ART GRIPS

Art(c)me
Moon and Assuva(c)Blueshinewolf
Moonstar(c)=rawr-vampirehorses

WIP One: [link]
WIP Two: [link]

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:iconthe-perspective:
Man, I just love the way you include so many shades in a picture. That gives the picture some life right off the bat. One of the things that could use a little more attention is the grass and how the wolves are standing on it. Some grass, at least, should be overlapping the paws slightly or should have some red and yellow tones in it to give it more depth. With the clouds, more varied strokes would make them seem less flat, which the horizantol lines do. Using darker colors to shade parts of the cloud where the moonlight isn't hitting it would help a lot too. Another idea would be to add more realistic tones in the sky, instead of lighter shades around the moon, mountains, and clouds.

Overall, wonderful job as usual! Keep it up. :]
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:iconaki--tenraku:
Wow very nice job! I was waiting to see this picture finished :D Anyway I really love how the wolves aren't the MAIN focus. it forces you too look at th scenery aswell. however it would have been nice to see a little more perspective in this piece. the one on the hill should be a little smaller than the other 2. it would have also been nice to see one of the other 2 (probably the red one?) closer to the viewer to create more depth. it would also save your hand from all that grass XD Oh yes one more thing while we are on the topic of grass - maybe add some of the grass in front of their feet so it doesn't look like they are floating just above the grass's surface. :) Anatomy wise I think you did great. I love the angels of the heads :3 very beautiful piece. well executed. good luck in the contest too! hope you place :D

btw is that the big dipper I spy? xD maybe i'm just going crazy starring at so many dots :faint:
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:iconaquaray8:
I love this you did am amazing job
:iconstormkitsune:
oh wow, moony will love this! You did a AMAZING job! i wish i had the 'magic touch' with traditional artwork like you do~ o3o

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I really hope I at least place. :D Thanks storm!

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Wow this is stunninggg~
Great job with the background and all the details! I really like the fur on the wolves [[[:

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:iconyoukokurama25:
WOW! I am absolutely stunned by this! I am totally jealous of your coloring abilities. You made everything looks so realistic and come to life.

I hope you do place in the contest! You did a fantastic job on this piece!


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looks great

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Thank you so much Givens. c:

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thank you!

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